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 [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]

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Tsuka-sensei
Touriste
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Tsuka-sensei


Masculin Messages : 4
Date d'inscription : 24/09/2011
Age : 30

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MessageSujet: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeSam 24 Sep - 22:43

Hello Hello!!

Well I would like to start with this, as my goal is to improve and I am sure that with your help we do.

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Masculin Messages : 10579
Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009
Age : 35
Localisation : The City

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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeSam 24 Sep - 23:28

Hi man!

For a first amv it's not bad at all.

First of all, there are no subtitles, logos or anything else. It's a good thing. Nevertheless, you should remove the "watermark" with the name of your studio, it's not really esthetic.

You have two main problems in your amv :

1) Your sync is too light. You have to mark it with transitions (cut, zoom, masking) and FX (glow, blur etc) and reducing the duration of your scenes. A good timing is mandatory to make a good amv.

2) Your way of manage the rythm is not good. You have to better follow the rythme of the song.
One example among several :at 1min 35: The music's rythm become faster and you put a scene really calm with no movements or action. It's not logical.


Besides, try to avoid lip flap (when characters move their lips without be synchronized on the singer voice).


Try to improve these points and your next amv will be better.

Good luck cheers
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Okill
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Masculin Messages : 3287
Date d'inscription : 22/06/2009
Age : 31
Localisation : Paris

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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeSam 24 Sep - 23:32

To put it in a Nutshell, Echo says everything.

Parfait j'ai calé l'expression qu'echo m'avait apprise pour le bac mdrrrrr




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Tsuka-sensei
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Tsuka-sensei


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Date d'inscription : 24/09/2011
Age : 30

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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeDim 25 Sep - 0:16

Thank you very much for the suggestions.
In my next AMV I will take into account each and every one of them, sure I will do best.

Merci.
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Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009
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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeDim 25 Sep - 11:12

Okill a écrit:
To put it in a Nutshell, Echo says everything.

Parfait j'ai calé l'expression qu'echo m'avait apprise pour le bac mdrrrrr

Ptdrrr culte.

@ Tsuka-sensei : Good luck!
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Skydean
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Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009
Age : 32
Localisation : Montrouge

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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!]   [AMV] Tieria Erde [Gundam 00][Cry!] Icon_minitimeDim 25 Sep - 18:56

And, please, take this wattermark off your video. That's not necessary Wink

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