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MessageSujet: Enix - Take me back   Enix - Take me back Icon_minitimeMer 7 Déc - 0:20

This is my new AMV =)
I would love to have your opinion =D

Song: The Cab - Angel With A Shotgun
Anime: Black Rock Shooter (OVA)
Download: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=184996



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MessageSujet: Re: Enix - Take me back   Enix - Take me back Icon_minitimeMer 7 Déc - 9:17

Hey Enix!

Don't hesitate to give us a download link^^

I gave quickly my opinion on youtube but I'll complete it in this topic tonight! Stay tuned Razz


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MessageSujet: Re: Enix - Take me back   Enix - Take me back Icon_minitimeMer 7 Déc - 11:41

Echotrooper a écrit:
Hey Enix!

Don't hesitate to give us a download link^^

I gave quickly my opinion on youtube but I'll complete it in this topic tonight! Stay tuned Razz

Ok done =)
Thank you Echo ^^
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MessageSujet: Re: Enix - Take me back   Enix - Take me back Icon_minitimeMer 7 Déc - 19:49

Hey:
I downloaded It.

So overall it's pretty nice, your editing is pretty clean even if there are some little mistakes but I see you have a good potential!

About the few mistakes (because it's the important point to improve Razz):

-About the zoom: they aren't not really bad but sometimes they should be better. Try to add some motion blur and more important, try to respect a simple rule when you make a zoom : the clip before the zoom has to be exactly the same than the clip after it. So, only "the value of plan" can change and only that.
Examples: 20 sec, you use a zoom on the hands. At the beginning the hand which gives the jewel is on the left and after the zoom it is on the right. So there is a problem, you should use a mirror effect or something like this to fix that.
Other example: 31 sec, the angle it's not the same on the face and after on the eye so your zoom is not perfect.

- 25 -28 sec: the sync is weird, in my opinion, but after you fix this point, so nothing serious.

-53-55 sec: I think you should insist more on timing here because it's just before the ultimate fight and the music permited it!

To conclude, It's a pretty good amv but if you insist more on the timing and fix problems about zoom, the next will be better Razz

I'm waiting for it !


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MessageSujet: Re: Enix - Take me back   Enix - Take me back Icon_minitimeJeu 8 Déc - 17:38

Hi, I like your amv even if sometimes the scenes are too long. I already how not too long then the AMV french imagine what I did with the English XD



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