I downloaded It.
So overall it's pretty nice, your editing is pretty clean even if there are some little mistakes but I see you have a good potential!
About the few mistakes (because it's the important point to improve
-About the zoom: they aren't not really bad but sometimes they should be better. Try to add some motion blur and more important, try to respect a simple rule when you make a zoom : the clip before the zoom has to be exactly the same than the clip after it. So, only "the value of plan" can change and only that.
Examples: 20 sec, you use a zoom on the hands. At the beginning the hand which gives the jewel is on the left and after the zoom it is on the right. So there is a problem, you should use a mirror effect or something like this to fix that.
Other example: 31 sec, the angle it's not the same on the face and after on the eye so your zoom is not perfect.
- 25 -28 sec: the sync is weird, in my opinion, but after you fix this point, so nothing serious.
-53-55 sec: I think you should insist more on timing here because it's just before the ultimate fight and the music permited it!
To conclude, It's a pretty good amv but if you insist more on the timing and fix problems about zoom, the next will be better
I'm waiting for it !