I don't really enjoy it because of two things:
1)The rythm is not well managed, you have to better follow the variations of the song when you edit it!
2) You overused the Twitch! It's not a bad FX but this time you used it all along your vid' and it's pretty boring. Besides, as you used the twitch everytime, the editing is not very good and your transitions are always the same!
I don't well remember but I think your previous work was better. So I'm sure you're able to editi something better without all this twitch plugin
Good luck for the next !