Your choice of music and anime is pretty good but the song editing is a little dirty
About your choice of transitions I will say like Okill... You know the technical aspects of zoom, masks and slides but it's not always well handle. For example, for a zoom the clips before and after the zoom has to be the same, only the scale has to change.
Try to improve this and I bet your next amv will be way better on an editing point of view. Good luck!