I think it lacks some transitions in the beginning (00:00 to 00:06), but it gets better afterwards
Sometimes there is a little lack of rythm too (like at 00:33 just before the chorus, or at 01:00 like irany said or 01:03).
But overall it looks good.
I'm looking forward to seeing your finished AMV
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