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Raikei
Roseau Fringant
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Raikei


Masculin Messages : 37
Date d'inscription : 05/11/2011
Age : 30
Localisation : Italy

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MessageSujet: Swords End   Swords End Icon_minitimeMer 1 Aoû - 13:50

Hi guys =D This is my new amv, pls give me your opinion =D

Dl: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=188588
Editor/Author: Raikei [https://www.youtube.com/user/RaikeiEnd]
Song: Story Of The Year - The Dream Is Over
Anime: Fate/ Stay Night - Unlimited Blade Works (Movie)
Category: Action

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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC75AHkEsnt3q309wT3E_Qyg
PBE
Sora to Kasai
Sora to Kasai
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Masculin Messages : 4353
Date d'inscription : 21/07/2010
Age : 32
Localisation : Du 29

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MessageSujet: Re: Swords End   Swords End Icon_minitimeMer 1 Aoû - 21:24

the rythm's nice most of the time, but i think it should have been smoother when we're in the verses, like more story-driven. cause anybody who hasn't seen UBW won't get a clue.

nothing really harsh to improve, but there's not much more than any other UBW amv.

i suggest you take a look à Fate/Zero, maybe you'll have more material Smile

up to the next!
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Satsumayu
Ancien Combattant SNK
Ancien Combattant SNK
Satsumayu


Féminin Messages : 697
Date d'inscription : 20/08/2011
Age : 30
Localisation : Les crêpes. La pluie.

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MessageSujet: Re: Swords End   Swords End Icon_minitimeMer 1 Aoû - 21:45

Overall the rythm was good, but it could have been better sometimes (for example at 0:04 or 0:40 you missed some music beats).
I thought it lacked effects/transiitions sometimes, but actually it didn't really bother me because your AMV is fast-paced.
About the choice of scenes, I think you could use slower scenes during the verses; For example at 1:37, the music changes pace, but you still use the same fight scenes.
Last thing, you should avoid characters talking without any reason like at 1:52 ^^
overall it's a nice action AMV Smile
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Raikei
Roseau Fringant
Roseau Fringant
Raikei


Masculin Messages : 37
Date d'inscription : 05/11/2011
Age : 30
Localisation : Italy

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MessageSujet: Re: Swords End   Swords End Icon_minitimeDim 5 Aoû - 12:39

Thx for the comments =D
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Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009
Age : 35
Localisation : The City

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MessageSujet: Re: Swords End   Swords End Icon_minitimeMar 7 Aoû - 10:43

+1 @ Satsumayu and PBE (who said I'm lazy?)
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