Overall the rythm was good, but it could have been better sometimes (for example at 0:04 or 0:40 you missed some music beats).
I thought it lacked effects/transiitions sometimes, but actually it didn't really bother me because your AMV is fast-paced.
About the choice of scenes, I think you could use slower scenes during the verses; For example at 1:37, the music changes pace, but you still use the same fight scenes.
Last thing, you should avoid characters talking without any reason like at 1:52 ^^
overall it's a nice action AMV