Well overall it's not bad but it remains some mistakes in your editing:
- the rythm is not always well managed even if i think you're improving on that point (for example at 1min25 your editing is not "intense" enough)
-The beginning with orihime is not good, your editing doesn't fit with the song, it's not "smooth". You have to avoid this kind of transitions with fix masks.
Otherwise, it's not a bad amv, you have good ideas but please try to avoid this kind of big glitch (2Min12)
Good luck for the next!