[Kyoroichi-NT] The Hollow Saviour

Spoiler:

Took about 3 weeks to make but It also has glitches everywhere!
Sorry about that, but I enjoyed making this.
Anime:Bleach
Music: The Used - The Bird and The Worm
End Music: Hollywood Undead - Black Dahlia
Author: Kyoroichi
(720p) DLL: http://www.sendspace.com/file/94ix97

Special thanks to

https://www.youtube.com/OrigamiiAMV
https://www.youtube.com/ProjectBarCodeError
https://www.youtube.com/bellyzbad1

Stream:

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Yo Kyo'

Well overall it's not bad but it remains some mistakes in your editing:

- the rythm is not always well managed even if i think you're improving on that point (for example at 1min25 your editing is not "intense" enough)
-The beginning with orihime is not good, your editing doesn't fit with the song, it's not "smooth". You have to avoid this kind of transitions with fix masks.

Otherwise, it's not a bad amv, you have good ideas but please try to avoid this kind of big glitch (2Min12)

Good luck for the next!

thank you adrien, i will try my best ^^

I think that sometimes you could've chosen better clips to emphasize (?) the different rythms of the music (like at 1:10 when the chorus begin but it's always the same scene)
And I found the scenes at 1:12 and 2:17 were a little too long.
But overall it was good, and there were some nice transitions