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Neνeямιnd Touriste


Messages : 16 Date d'inscription : 28/09/2012 Age : 26 Localisation : Italy
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Ven 12 Oct - 12:14 | |
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Draga Converti


Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 26 Localisation : France/Tunisie
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Ven 12 Oct - 20:57 | |
| Already a new one? xD Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure  You could have make it longer :p 1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want. As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!!  Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one   Thx Oxide !!! <3----------------------------------------------------------- Merci Yor u ! |
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Neνeямιnd Touriste


Messages : 16 Date d'inscription : 28/09/2012 Age : 26 Localisation : Italy
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Sam 13 Oct - 9:12 | |
| - Draga a écrit:
- Already a new one? xD
Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure 
You could have make it longer :p
1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want.
As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!! 
Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one  Thank you Draga  yes, I know I have to put in some transition mask xD also because I love them, anyway thanks for the compliments and for the support  |
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Draga Converti


Messages : 1372 Date d'inscription : 19/05/2012 Age : 26 Localisation : France/Tunisie
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Sam 13 Oct - 11:36 | |
| Stop being lazy and just do it! hhhhhh , np bro   Thx Oxide !!! <3----------------------------------------------------------- Merci Yor u ! |
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MagicDarkLight Sora to Kasai


Messages : 6911 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 26 Localisation : BELGIQUE
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Dim 14 Oct - 12:28 | |
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Echotrooper Sora to Kasai


Messages : 10580 Date d'inscription : 05/04/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : The City
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Lun 15 Oct - 13:53 | |
| As your fellow Vipertrix, good improvement man. You're really interesting nero team's boys  Anyway, be careful with the accelerations of your clips, often it was really too much, try to better manage them. Good luck for the next! |
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Neνeямιnd Touriste


Messages : 16 Date d'inscription : 28/09/2012 Age : 26 Localisation : Italy
![The wings of the raven [Alexei] Empty](https://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif) | Sujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei] Mar 16 Oct - 11:59 | |
| Thx to all for the comment and support  In fact I used those written too :(and at certain points I arranged with some scenes that centravano anything .. I'll be more careful next time, thanks again  |
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