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MessageSujet: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeVen 12 Oct - 12:14

My new amv guys, I give your opinion pls Very Happy

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MessageSujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeVen 12 Oct - 20:57

Already a new one? xD

Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure Smile

You could have make it longer :p

1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want.

As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!! Very Happy

Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one Smile


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Thx Oxide !!! <3

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MessageSujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeSam 13 Oct - 9:12

Draga a écrit:
Already a new one? xD

Nice one ^^ I like it , you improved that's for sure Smile

You could have make it longer :p

1:03-1:05 , the next time , remove things like that , only some pictures with twitch and some overlays , i mean in an action part you need only movements , so this kill the flow , it's just an advice but do what you want.

As your previous work , this work misses some awesome transitions , MASKING!!! Very Happy

Glad to see your improvement , i'm looking forward your next one Smile
Thank you Draga Very Happy yes, I know I have to put in some transition mask xD also because I love them, anyway thanks for the compliments and for the support Very Happy
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Stop being lazy and just do it! hhhhhh , np bro Smile


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MessageSujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeDim 14 Oct - 12:28

Not bad, yeah that looks more interesting than your last one.

I think the beginning is pretty dark, I don't know if it's the anime or else but I didn't really know what was going on xD

You use quite a lot of this lateral transition like at 00:48 but I don't think it's always a good idea, there should be a movement in the first place to use this one imo.

From 1:03, you have a lot of static plan and too much lip synch which aren't really acurate, it's breaking the pace and that's a problem because it's the chorus part, where the pace should have been the strongest. Well it becomes better around 1:12.

So yeah, you should try to follow more the variations of the music and try to use your scenes at best to follow the rythm of the music.

Still a nice amv here so yeah! Good job man


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MessageSujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeLun 15 Oct - 13:53

As your fellow Vipertrix, good improvement man. You're really interesting nero team's boys Razz

Anyway, be careful with the accelerations of your clips, often it was really too much, try to better manage them.

Good luck for the next!


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MessageSujet: Re: The wings of the raven [Alexei]   The wings of the raven [Alexei] Icon_minitimeMar 16 Oct - 11:59

Thx to all for the comment and support Very Happy In fact I used those written too :(and at certain points I arranged with some scenes that centravano anything .. I'll be more careful next time, thanks again Very Happy
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