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MessageSujet: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Sam 13 Oct - 10:44

yo here;s my 5th upload - [Edit]
editing this was a bit demotivating but i think this turned out ok, Please ggive me your opinion !



DDL: mediafire.com download.php?9kg2d7qpfo889n7 480p



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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Sam 13 Oct - 11:44

I already commented on youtube , but i'll say it again here ^^

I think the first 30 seconds were a little boring , i know it's a slow part but...i don't know...maybe it's me -_-

1:11 The zoom wasn't that smooth , you could have make it better

2:53 The same here , i think you should have added more blur

I won't say anything about masking because i think it was fine enough Smile

Overall , i like it , very nice amv , i'm waiting for your next one , and as i said before , F*** Youtube view system:p




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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Sam 13 Oct - 12:13

I'll give you my opinion when I'll get back a real internet connexion.



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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Sam 13 Oct - 12:23

Draga a écrit:
I already commented on youtube , but i'll say it again here ^^

I think the first 30 seconds were a little boring , i know it's a slow part but...i don't know...maybe it's me -_-

1:11 The zoom wasn't that smooth , you could have make it better

2:53 The same here , i think you should have added more blur

I won't say anything about masking because i think it was fine enough Smile

Overall , i like it , very nice amv , i'm waiting for your next one , and as i said before , F*** Youtube view system:p

Thx alot for your opinion, next amv ill try not to leave errors where people can pick up !!
anyways its good to see you on this forum aswell ^^
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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Sam 13 Oct - 13:11

Np bro , good luck Very Happy




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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Dim 14 Oct - 11:54

Hey!

It's been a while since I've seen an air gear amv, especially with the first anime and I have to say I liked it! Most transitions were pretty well executed, there were good ideas, it's a nice job.

I'll agree with Draga, the beginning isn't really interesting, too static and it didn't fit the music so well in my opinion. (The scene where Ikki is about to fall with the air treck etc.)

At 2:14 the scene with Kazu bugged me out a little, because it's fighting scenes in the calm part.

2:31 and others, be careful with those transitions where you move the camera with a mask, it's not always got a natural feeling, especially when the scene is static at first.

But yeah it was nice overalls, you did well, good job Smile



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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Lun 15 Oct - 0:47

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hey!

It's been a while since I've seen an air gear amv, especially with the first anime and I have to say I liked it! Most transitions were pretty well executed, there were good ideas, it's a nice job.

I'll agree with Draga, the beginning isn't really interesting, too static and it didn't fit the music so well in my opinion. (The scene where Ikki is about to fall with the air treck etc.)

At 2:14 the scene with Kazu bugged me out a little, because it's fighting scenes in the calm part.

2:31 and others, be careful with those transitions where you move the camera with a mask, it's not always got a natural feeling, especially when the scene is static at first.

But yeah it was nice overalls, you did well, good job Smile

Thanks alot MDL for you opinion and advise ^^
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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Lun 15 Oct - 13:48

Nothing special to add on what MDL said (lack of rythm in the beginning, problems with some transitions) but yeah, you continue to get better, it's a good thing.

GL for the next, In my opinion you have the skill now to make really interesting amv! I'm waiting for the next one Wink



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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Mar 16 Oct - 7:25

Echotrooper a écrit:
Nothing special to add on what MDL said (lack of rythm in the beginning, problems with some transitions) but yeah, you continue to get better, it's a good thing.

GL for the next, In my opinion you have the skill now to make really interesting amv! I'm waiting for the next one Wink

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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Dim 21 Oct - 12:15

I don't have much to add
The beginning was too slow, especially when you compare it to the rest of the amv.
found the transitions were good, but some felt a little wierd , like the feather at 2:19.
Overall it was a nice AMV, good luck for the next one Wink



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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Mer 24 Oct - 11:34

Satsumayu a écrit:
I don't have much to add
The beginning was too slow, especially when you compare it to the rest of the amv.
found the transitions were good, but some felt a little wierd , like the feather at 2:19.
Overall it was a nice AMV, good luck for the next one Wink

ye i was stuck on that scene for some time so i decided to use that feather mask lol
anyways thanks for the comment ^^
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MessageSujet: Re: [Vipertrix] Air Gear - Ride the Sky   Jeu 25 Oct - 21:46

bravo, i like your job air gear is not easy for a amv and the mix with the OAV and the old anime is good

i like your "rythme" with the song

nice job ^^



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