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MessageSujet: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeDim 18 Nov - 23:56

Give me your opinion guys =D

Download: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=189856
Editor: Raikei |NT|
Software: Sony Vegas/AE Cs4
Anime: Fate/ Stay Night - Unlimited Blade Works (Movie) // - Fate/Zero (TV) // - Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood (TV) // - Kara No Kyoukai 6: Boukyaku Rokuon
Music: The Blackout - Never By Your Side
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MessageSujet: Re: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeLun 19 Nov - 14:51

Quite interesting.
You accelerated your scenes way too much ! Try to fluidify the movements and internal sych in your clip but keep in mind that it has to look natural. The speed of your scenes must not seem out of control.

You don't need that much speed to fit the rhythm of the music, all is in the timing ;P (placing the good scenes at the right moment)

I noticed that you did cared about the transitions. I didn't see any bad ones, that's a good point ^^
Even if I can't tell whether they came directly from the anime or not, that does not matter. What really matters is that they are cool and aren't eyesores Wink

Keep going ! =)
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MessageSujet: Re: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeLun 19 Nov - 19:16

Quand Okill va clipper FSN ça va être une tuerie vu comme c'est cheaté.
SInon c'est ouf, deuxième clip que je regarde ce soir sur le forum et deuxième zik clippée par Luciole xD Soit il a clippé toutes les ziks du monde, soit y a un manque de renouvellement Razz

Anyway, as skydean said, it's not bad but be careful with the acceleration of your clips!

Good luck for the next man!
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nice friend Very Happy
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MessageSujet: Re: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeLun 19 Nov - 21:19

I really liked it man, good job here, I'd say yes one problem is the acceleration but what really bugged me were the parts where the music isn't changing but you don't keep up with the speed you show just before and so it's not always going up and up, that can be a problem.
Another one is some scenes don't go with another one because of the colors, you go from red to blue without any transitions and it's "shocking" the eye sometimes.

But anyways, nice job! See you to the next!
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MessageSujet: Re: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeLun 19 Nov - 21:38

Mmmh I had never seen that anim that's why I didn't understand certains parts but in fact I think i didn't understand because I never saw that anim and because you accelerate this parts.

The transitions and effects are goods. I liked your amv but the biggest problem for me is the acceleration yeah.
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MessageSujet: Re: [Raikei] Disappear   [Raikei] Disappear Icon_minitimeMar 20 Nov - 13:20

Echotrooper a écrit:
SInon c'est ouf, deuxième clip que je regarde ce soir sur le forum et deuxième zik clippée par Luciole xD Soit il a clippé toutes les ziks du monde, soit y a un manque de renouvellement Razz

Ouais, je sais pas ce qu'ils ont xD
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Thank you all for your comments and for the advice Smile
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