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 Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012

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MessageSujet: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Lun 17 Déc - 17:08


Hi Guys.
This is my first participation on Akross Con,and i tried a different thing for this.

Story: Menma is an angel and remember the childhood spent with her friends, and she begins to cry a lot ..
Jintan at some point begins to hear the voice of Menma and he begins to run from the house where they met when they were children (and they think that Menma is still alive) but at some point he remembers that Menma is dead .. (and becomes desperate) and in the flow of memories,remember that Menma is an angel..

Special Thanks: Radical yue,StickyGaiden,Chainedestudio,MistykAmv,Kazuko,Umika
Especially thanks: Kyros,[key]Scarlet

And i gave my best for this video,i hope you like it Smile
Thanks for watching.

Making off: http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/3998/smemories.png
DL: http://akross.ru/index.cgi?act=video;id=3399
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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Lun 17 Déc - 19:07

Sad good job.






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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Lun 17 Déc - 19:32

Hi man!

I liked it, it was nicely done overalls. The story was simple and thus easy to understand, good job on twisting it slightly, it was a good idea and the scenes from different animes you implemented went well with ano hana!

But I think there are still some flaws, first, some parts before and in the beginning of the chorus look a bit rougher than they should be, it was confusing about the pace you wanted to put. Also some rolls who aren't really connecting two similar scenes or that are using too much blur (example: 1:10) while most of your dezooms/zooms are blurless, hence they lack fluidity.

Another point is the color correction, that may be just me but I think the blue filter you used could have had more contrast, like this it looked a bit monochrome to me.

And yeah, some stuff implemented could have look better, like the wings, maybe with some blur/lights on it it would have looked better, or the sheet from ef who's flying away on the face of the hero, maybe it wasn't the best scene to use as a background here. And of course, there's this mask at 1:50 but I guess you figured this one out xD

But besides that I can tell this is a good solid video with nice story twist and implementations, it was interesting, good job and good luck in the contest!



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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Mar 18 Déc - 13:10

Yop Cecco!

As MDL said it's pretty good but there are some editing mistakes and few FX/compositing could be better (wings behind the girls, come color correction).

Otherwise, I won't say again what MDL said so Good luck!



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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Mar 18 Déc - 15:27

And i know the wings it's not perfect Dx
But thanks very much guys! Very Happy
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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Jeu 20 Déc - 19:51

Good video.
But, I think the music just doesn't change rythm enough.
So accelerate the image was just more hard, but I think you did well.

Hope for more videos.
^^


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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Jeu 20 Déc - 22:52

not bad but i think this song is overused but still nice Very Happy
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MessageSujet: Re: Angel's Memories - Akross Con 2012   Lun 24 Déc - 18:09

Yes i know this song is overused T__T
But thanks guys! Smile
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