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 [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta

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El.G
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Kyoroichi
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Kyoroichi


Masculin Messages : 523
Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012
Age : 27
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MessageSujet: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 27 Déc - 17:59

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Editor: Sempai ; Kyoroichi
Music: C2C - DELTA
Anime: K project ; Full metal alchemist
DL LINK: http://www.sendspace.com/file/9uoldf
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 27 Déc - 20:31

Hey man ! so you did a collab with sempai^^ , nice collab Smile

Track 1 : Some scenes were too long so the pace wasn't that good , he must hide the logo too because sometimes we see it , like at 00:40
00:42 : the mask was useless and too slow

Track 2 : Your zooms in/out were too strong and sometimes too fast ^^ try to make them smoother xD
You used many times the transition of the leaf ^^ try to change , i mean the other transitions were good , i only had a problem with this one

I think that's all for me ^^ overall i like it , but i had a problem with the music , it wasn't that good , well it's only my taste^^ so don't care about it if you want :p

Good job , see ya for the next one Smile
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Kyoroichi
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Date d'inscription : 07/05/2012
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 27 Déc - 21:01

thanks draga!
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Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 27 Déc - 22:20

Hi!

I liked the first track, it was good overalls, well yeah maybe you are missing some synch but it didn't really bug me.
The second track wasn't that good though. And the transition between the two of them was really poor done, the colors of each part were just too different, I think it wouldn't have been a bad idea to add color correction to the FMA part to match with the colors of Kprojet better.

So yeah, there were some odd rolling transitions, because they were going in a different direction than the move just before. The cam moves could be smoother and more accurate. The masks or chromi I'm not sure at some parts weren't really clean, or at least there was too much of the same transition. And wtf with the colo at 1:32? xD So yeah there were some nice transitions (though I feel like it's always the same with those openings) but a lot of them could be improved in term of cleanliness and fluidity.

See you to the next!
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 27 Déc - 23:53

ah thanks always good advice MDL!!
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Date d'inscription : 09/06/2012
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeVen 28 Déc - 20:14

Hey I didnt like this collab Mask in part 1 is not really clean part 2 i didnt like the zooms + there are no rythme in your video anyway good luck see u next time Smile
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeLun 31 Déc - 4:59

Hey
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeLun 31 Déc - 13:54

Hi Razz
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeLun 31 Déc - 14:11

As I said on youtube, it's a really nice collab, good job to u
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeMar 1 Jan - 1:48

Thanks again Smile
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeMar 1 Jan - 19:02

Not bad, but I think the music doesn't fit really well the animes you used.

Otherwise, you're always editing I see Razz
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeMar 1 Jan - 19:38

haha I try to be as active as possible thanks again adrien Razz
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeJeu 3 Jan - 19:13

I didn't really like those anime with that kind of music (I wasn't expecting fighting on this music).
But it was still a nice AMV Smile
There where some technical mistakes, but they were already pointed out by MDl Smile, I especially didn't like the fast dezooms at the end, and the weird chromi at 1:52
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Date d'inscription : 03/12/2012
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta   kyoroichi - [Kyoroichi&Sempai - NT] Delta Icon_minitimeMer 9 Jan - 23:09

Very Great !
^^

But is true that the music don't match with FMA.

Anyway, I'm lovin it.
^^
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