Sorry but actually I didn't like most of the parts, to me most of the time you all used too much effects that didn't really fit the editing or were just there to hide some lacks in rythm synch' and other basic stuff of editing, or worse: were just bad xD So yeah you should focus more on the basis and then cares about the effects.
Be careful also about the frame blending, that's because of the fps being different (sources and project must have the same fps).
That said, your part was the best one, though the beginning until 0:45 had the same problem, too much effects, not really fitting. But from 0:45 till the end of your part it was really interesting with well implemented fonts and stuff, well still some flaws in your transitions but overalls it's quite good.
So yeah, I don't really know the other ones, but I think you can do much better, good luck for the next one