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MessageSujet: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Mar 8 Jan - 18:29



Video: Glorium
Category: Action, Character Profile, Drama, Serious
Anime: Aoi Bungaku Series
Song: Europa
Artist: Globus
Creator: [key]Scarlet (Rising Production)

Plot: A long-time unsuccessful writer wants write a good novel. He starts writing, but finding inspiration it's really hard. Then, he comes up with an idea: but will it be the good one?

I've started this video just for fun, cause a long time was passed from my last video, and the will of editing was great. Therefore, Glorium was just a vent in the beginning, but the more I went ahead with the project, the more I liked the story behind it. I've finished in only seven days, but I'm pretty proud of the result.

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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Mar 8 Jan - 19:36

You already know what i think about it, but i'll c/c for sake

i really liked the concept which combines aoi bungaku stories through the one with the writer. i liked the idea

therefore , two details :1- i think your choice to pick the lyrical version with the"serial killer" sequence don't fit at all, cause the song speaks about Europe wars and you make a character profile of a modern killer. it sounds very odd. but when he retries to write his novel, the other story fits a lot more. Maybe trying instrumental or having a more fitting anime for the first half would have been more appropriate.

2-Some cuts felt rough in manner of color difference. i would have prefered more fluid or innovative ways to change from the writer to the stories he writes. the concept made it possible, so it felt bit rushed in that matter.

to sum up, i found it like the ending: unfinished. but i had a good impression of what you wanted to try on this amv who is quite fine for the time you edited on it. i'll be glad to see your next one if you find the time to put all you want.




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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Mar 8 Jan - 19:52

ProjectBarcodeError a écrit:
You already know what i think about it, but i'll c/c for sake

i really liked the concept which combines aoi bungaku stories through the one with the writer. i liked the idea

therefore , two details :1- i think your choice to pick the lyrical version with the"serial killer" sequence don't fit at all, cause the song speaks about Europe wars and you make a character profile of a modern killer. it sounds very odd. but when he retries to write his novel, the other story fits a lot more. Maybe trying instrumental or having a more fitting anime for the first half would have been more appropriate.

2-Some cuts felt rough in manner of color difference. i would have prefered more fluid or innovative ways to change from the writer to the stories he writes. the concept made it possible, so it felt bit rushed in that matter.

to sum up, i found it like the ending: unfinished. but i had a good impression of what you wanted to try on this amv who is quite fine for the time you edited on it. i'll be glad to see your next one if you find the time to put all you want.
Well, I already knew what you think about it, I'm glad you like my video, and..
i'll c/c for sake XD

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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Mer 9 Jan - 15:19

I'll give you my op' this week end!



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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Ven 11 Jan - 22:59

Hello!

Unfortunately I didn't really like your vid' though it's still a nice work. What bugged me in the first place is that I wouldn't have used this song even if I can tell why you'd go with this one.

But there're also some technical points like the color correction and how you just cut from the real word to the "novel": imo the colors greend and red weren't going well together and I think the change in colors should have needed more than just a cut with some rough shakes to pass from one color to another. Of course I know you wanted to clearly put the boundary between the two "world" but I think it needed more work to look really cool in a video.

Apart from that, the editing was rather nice, you did a cool job so yeah, good job and good luck in the Akross Wink



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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Dim 13 Jan - 16:05

Yop !

Well my opinion is pretty similar with MDL's one, it's not a bad amv and the concept is really interesting I think, but I'm not sure about the choice of song (whicj is really nice otherwise, but I don't think it fits with your anime. Maybe it's because we know another amv on this music which is really about war).
Besides, I think the color correction should be better too.

But overall it's a solid work, Good luck!!



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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Glorium   Dim 13 Jan - 16:36

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hello!

Unfortunately I didn't really like your vid' though it's still a nice work. What bugged me in the first place is that I wouldn't have used this song even if I can tell why you'd go with this one.

But there're also some technical points like the color correction and how you just cut from the real word to the "novel": imo the colors greend and red weren't going well together and I think the change in colors should have needed more than just a cut with some rough shakes to pass from one color to another. Of course I know you wanted to clearly put the boundary between the two "world" but I think it needed more work to look really cool in a video.

Apart from that, the editing was rather nice, you did a cool job so yeah, good job and good luck in the Akross Wink
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Yop !

Well my opinion is pretty similar with MDL's one, it's not a bad amv and the concept is really interesting I think, but I'm not sure about the choice of song (whicj is really nice otherwise, but I don't think it fits with your anime. Maybe it's because we know another amv on this music which is really about war).
Besides, I think the color correction should be better too.

But overall it's a solid work, Good luck!!
Yeah I agree about the coloration, it needed more work (actually all the video needed more work, but like I've already written, I had few time for completing this).
About the music, I personally think that its mood fits perfectly with the anime and with I wanted to do, and yeah the lyrics isn't so, but in general in the AMVs the most important thing is the atmosphere which the song gives to the video, and several times the lyrics is less important than the music/video combination.

However, thank for your comments and for your greetings, good luck to you too!
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