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MessageSujet: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Dim 20 Jan - 15:00



It started operation and turned into a war ...

That's the idea I'm trying to convey in this amv, I was not trying to show the exact plot, but in a different way.



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Anime:Hellsing Ultimate
Music:Celldweller-First Person Shooter
DL:mediafire.com ?plv1f5stft9d042

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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Dim 20 Jan - 21:43

Hi!

Interesting work as your previous one, I also think you improved a lot on the technical side, it's a good point.

However there still are some stuff which could be cleaner like the tv simulator effect (like 0:42), if you want to do some kind of "glitch" effect I think you should learn some cooler ones on AE because it really looks outdated now. There are a lot of plugins which can do way better.

Rolls like 0:22 should be avoided since they don't really have a reason behind it, I mean it doesn't look natural when you're rolling from one plan to another one which isn't really related. When watching it I thought you were using it a bit too recklessly.

Your multiscreen effect, two or three times in an amv it's ok but for me you used it too many times, it wasn't really interesting to watch in the end.
The typo, at the beginning were cool! And then I think you used Arial or I don't know but I didn't really like the other font you used, it didn't fit the atmosphere as well as the first one. (In case they were the same, I'm sorry, I just had this feeling Razz )
At the end around 2:27 you're making a transition with a blurred circle, well it's not really clean in my opinion.

But apart from that, I found it pretty cool, a nice research of transitions, a cool editing overall and somehow a visual concept. So yeah, you've improved and I'm looking forward to your next ones. Keep it up :gg:



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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Lun 21 Jan - 10:15

Thanks Smile appreciate your opinion and this forum because here On the following relatively more difficult and detailed elsewhere
So thank you and I will try to improve further
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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Mer 23 Jan - 15:06

Well, you're still improving, your next one should be really good.
Anyway, this one is pretty interesting, you put a lot of efforts in it, I can see it.
I think your editing is mainly good even if there is some little mistakes like these cookie cutters, you used sometimes To make your transitions.
Besides, be careful with some effects like the tv simulator, I think it could be better managed.
Same thing with your use of fonts. It was a good idea but the animation could be smoother.

Otherwise, you have really good ideas, I'm waiting for your next one!



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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Mer 23 Jan - 18:01

hellsing, love! bis2

The video is cool and the whole Assembly is really nice.

It's a shame that the quality is very low and that the effects are too simple. The clip will have been a really good clip but two flaws are that I stay on my hunger. xD

Once the default is corrected, you'll make us really good clip.

Wait to see!
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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Ven 25 Jan - 16:41

ooo595 a écrit:
That's the idea I'm trying to convey in this amv, I was not trying to show the exact plot, but in a different way.

Y'know, when there is blood and violence in an Hellsing AMV, it's already the exact plot anyway.

There is something a bit weird with the rythm especially with sunch a repetetive music! Lyrics don't had too munch also. I'd say there is a lot of risk to ry to make this amv different from most amv...but there is something missing to convince me... what could it be?

1-Well, lyrics is a good idea, but they tend to make us want to follow some kind of plot...or story, yet, this is just fighting we see and not munch plot at all! Not a bad idea, but something is just not right about it for me.

2-Some transition (or effets) ar not too nice...and it's pretty hard to see some of your images without think of the repetetive rythm.

3-Tough the amv has a lot of potential, I think it's not too different overall from a normal action amv.


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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Ven 25 Jan - 16:56

Hey !

Except your texts, this is really cool Razz


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MessageSujet: Re: The first person to shoot the first person to kill    Dim 27 Jan - 10:34

well,thanks for the comments and reviews
I'll take the reviews as the main effects, transitions, and try to improve it in the next amv Smile
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