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MessageSujet: Sleeping Void.   Jeu 28 Mar - 20:11

Well, just a 2 hours work as you can see, not much effort was put on this just experimenting some new camera movements and flashes and storylines.

Soo, i posted a work here long ago perhaps one year, and i finally got the time to do something else, so i basicly think my flaws are; Lack of imagination for transitions, sometimes skipped beats, some failed shakes and what more. Oh well i just wanted an opinion to improve this style, thanks in advance

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Streaming: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTnxONYBak0


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MessageSujet: Re: Sleeping Void.   Sam 30 Mar - 12:59

What are you doing here biatch! xD , anyway , glad to see you here , I'll watch your video then i'll edit ^^

So for 2 hours work it's nice^^ but i can't say anything special since it was done in such short time.

About your zooms , your two first ones are two brutal because the music is going slowly (the same for few others)

Avoid LIP FLAPS ! like at 00:20 , it's really not nice at all!

So to try to improve your style you should :

-Spend more time on your AMV xD

-Try other transitions , because here it's almost the same thing ( more flashs , more masks , slide transition ( for example ) , etc...) , release your imagination ^^

I think that's all for a work of 2 hours , when you come back with something better edited , i'll give more details ^^

Anyway , keep it up , and good luck Very Happy




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MessageSujet: Re: Sleeping Void.   Sam 30 Mar - 13:31

It's pretty cool for 2hours ! Some shake aren't good but that's fine, good job !




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MessageSujet: Re: Sleeping Void.   Sam 30 Mar - 15:27

Hey guys, thanks to the both of you !


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MessageSujet: Re: Sleeping Void.   Sam 30 Mar - 15:35

Hello!
Wtf I wouldn't be able to do so many stuff in only 2h xD Good job for it, but it's a shame it ends so roughly. Otherwise it's quite well edited, no real flaws but yeah if you took some more time you could have improve some transitions, it's not always really interesting.

But good job man Wink



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MessageSujet: Re: Sleeping Void.   Sam 30 Mar - 18:01

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hello!
Wtf I wouldn't be able to do so many stuff in only 2h xD Good job for it, but it's a shame it ends so roughly. Otherwise it's quite well edited, no real flaws but yeah if you took some more time you could have improve some transitions, it's not always really interesting.

But good job man Wink

Yo MDL ! Thanks for the critique really, it makes me happy to hear that. And yeah i agree with you, i think my main problem is the variety of transitions or better the lack of it. l: This was a pree easy work, by the middle of the vid i just started copying frames to other clips and what more. XD


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