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MessageSujet: [Breaker] Sword of Memories    sword - [Breaker] Sword of Memories  Icon_minitimeLun 1 Avr - 11:28

Yo!

I made this Clip in 4 or 3 days Imo it got bad at the end T.T I started making this right after my big contest entry xD Hope its not too bad. Very Happy The Optical flares might of been too much and something went wrong with the twitch scratch :Elg:
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MessageSujet: Re: [Breaker] Sword of Memories    sword - [Breaker] Sword of Memories  Icon_minitimeMar 2 Avr - 9:33

Hey!

The main problem it's the lack of rythm, I think you could do way better on that. I mean, when the chorus begin, it's not enough "fast".
Be careful too, in the calm part, around 2 min, try to avoid statics clips, don't hesitate to add some cam' moves even if they are really smooth.

Otherwise, it's pretty nice dude! Good luck for the next!


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Thanks Echo will keep that in mind ^^ afro
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MessageSujet: Re: [Breaker] Sword of Memories    sword - [Breaker] Sword of Memories  Icon_minitimeMar 2 Avr - 10:55

Yep, but your amv was a good surprise Razz


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MessageSujet: Re: [Breaker] Sword of Memories    sword - [Breaker] Sword of Memories  Icon_minitimeMar 2 Avr - 12:33

Hi!

I agree with Echo, be careful too with some of your transitions, sometimes you go into white and the scene after that is dark for example. What I mean in general is that you could have managed the colors better. If I exagerated I'd say you can't go from blue to red with a simple cut.

Otherwise it was pretty nice! Some little flaws but nothing worth to criticize I think Razz Good job and good luck in BC


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MessageSujet: Re: [Breaker] Sword of Memories    sword - [Breaker] Sword of Memories  Icon_minitimeMar 2 Avr - 12:48

Thx MDL bounce


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