[Kisagi] Fighting;Girls

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This video came out differently than I wanted. This has some mistakes and a few mess ups, but hopefully this appears enjoyable to you guys. I had some free time on my hands so I had decided to do this and get more ideas of a project that I"m working on.

Tell me what you think

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http://www.animemusicvideos.org/video/192063

Yo ! I would say the same thing for your last video ^^

First avoid lip flaps (when people just talk like that , for nothing ) , just for that we can stop watching the rest , sometimes we see one but we continue because we think that the editor didn't notice it , but if there are too much...

Try some transitions! Flashes , slides , masks , even some overlays/color corrections , why not....

The synchro/pace aren't that good too , you have to work more on that , sometimes there are long scenes so it kills the pace.

Too static! it lacks mouvement! all the mouvements we have here are from scenes , and it's only in few moments but you can do something about it too , with adding slides , or masks , or some camera mouvements , for example.

I think that's all for the moment , good luck for your next one

Thanks man!

I agree with you fully on the lip flap part, I guess I just put it in there oh well. For the stuff well there are some flashes (not much) and since I really don't use sony vegas much I decided not to do any transitions since I won't be able to do the type I want to, but there is one though. As for color correction, to me it felt as if it didn't really need any I usually add it, but this time I didn't. Also there are actually quite of few movements that I put in myself and not from the anime.

Yeah i know ^^ you did few things of what i said , but it's not that clear or too little , that's why i said that there is almost nothing of that , and for the transitions we don't care , even if it's not as you like , you try your best , if it's not good enough we'll tell you , until you do them as you want , otherwise you'll never be able to do it ^^

WE HAVE TO START SOMEDAY xD

ah I see, though I mostly do my transitions in after effects, but I'll keep that in mind next time I use sony vegas. Thanks!

Yeah it's not a problem , in AE or SV , it's as you like , just make something good^^ , you can do a little on vegas , render in avi , import to AE , do your effects , then re-import on vegas , etc...but it's useless , you can do everything on vegas xD , you import on ae only if you want to do something you can't do with sony vegas , like adding some twitch for example.

You're welcome

yes I am well aware of all this AE is my main I just use SV when I feel like editing something quick or for fun. I sometimes use both, but it's rare.

Shiiittt the Amv i'm working on has the same song x)

Yo

Not too bad but not really interesting either, you still have some really static scenes that break the moves you're making just before. There are also quite a lot of lip flaps, those should really disappear.

Imo you relie a little too much on the anime even though it's not cut for what you need to make in your amv, don't be afraid of changing it a little more to make it more like yours in order to follow the music the best you can. Your scene selection is not too bad when it comes to pacing but it lacks a lot in impact because you mostly use simple cuts. It's true that a cut can be powerful but most of the times you'll have to "cheat" a little to make it awesome (a cam move, a flash, any effect useful...)

Keep it up

@inarkx10 lol

@MDL yeah I need to fix that. Thanks!

The main flaws were already mentionned (lip flaps and too many static scenes), so I won't talk about that.
I think you should try to add some transitions/effects to emphasize (?) the change of muscis. For examples, that part at 0:22 with that noisy sound. It's not like you should add effect everywhere, but I just felt that sometimes it was missing something.
But apart from that it wasn't bad,
good luck for your next project