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 [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me

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MessageSujet: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Jeu 6 Juin - 15:36

Yo, I've finally completed. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit done in a hurry but I can not complain. In comparison to my previous work this is the best, but I want to improve again and reach a very high level of editing Smile I hope you like it.
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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Jeu 6 Juin - 15:57

Hey!

Well not bad, but tooooooooo many accelerations, man you can't do this all the time, it doesn't look right. And from 0:08 till 0:35 I thought the pace was kinda bad, you have two parts here, and we don't feel the difference between the chorus and the first part. Not to forget that the chorus was really too fast.

But after that it's much better if we forget about some accelerations. And I don't understand why adding some Kara no Kyoukai at the end xD I don't have anything about mixing the animes but that just felt random.

Anyways, it had potential so I'm waiting for you next work



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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Jeu 6 Juin - 16:03

Yeah, I know. I made ​​too many mistakes because I was in a hurry to post a new AMV Sad At the next AMV will go with calm and try not to make more mistakes, thanks for the comment Smile
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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Jeu 6 Juin - 18:58

Unfortunately , the accelerations ruined everything , sometimes there are too fast , it's a shame cause cuz there were some cool moments , I noticed the song cut , it wasn't bad , but too much cut and yor amv became too short and the pace is almost unchanged.

On top of that , a member of your team edited with this song too "kyoroichi" and he didn't accelerate scenes like that , i didin't say you have to follow him , but you can have an idea about "how to edit with this song".

And the add of KNK in the end is really useless , making a various isn't a probleme here , but do it through all the amv , not just by adding another anime in the last secondes xD

Anyway , it wasn't bad ^^ just correct these few mistakes and i'm sure you'll make something really good next time because i saw your other projects Very Happy

Good luck !




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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Jeu 6 Juin - 19:04

As MDL stated, many accelerations don't look natural, especially when the music isn't that fast. Moreover because the scenes in the beginning are so fast, we don't really feel the change between the first verse and the chorus/faster part.
But overall it wasn't bad, and I especially liked the middle part ^^ .



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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Ven 7 Juin - 8:21

It's pretty nice, but really fast





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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Mer 12 Juin - 21:32

I agree with MDL




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MessageSujet: Re: [AMV] Overcreed - Forgive me   Ven 14 Juin - 4:14

Too Fast Too Furious ;D still it's pretty dynamic keep it up !



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