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MessageSujet: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 12:53



Hello there! here is something that I am a bit rusty on... ehh...

Story:
This weekend I was very hungry for some reason and I'm usually never hungry, but this time I was. While making this I drank 5 bottles of water each day and ate several different foods once a day. So yeah I ate a little, hehe... Well over going through with this once I actually ate a lot I actually stopped editing this, which was yesterday. I really can't edit when I'm hungry because I get exactly no ideas at all so this turned out kind of "meh". Well, if you enjoy this than that's coo and if you don't I can see why.


Things
There are some errors and some "what the fuck is this supposed to do?" problems in here as well. So yep, nuff said...





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 13:55

Hello

It's not bad, I liked it, even though most of the optical flares looked forced onto the screen, they weren't well enough implemented imo and if we're a little familiar with this effect we can spot it from the first one since they all look really like the presets. 

But yeah, it was ok, the source, which I had never seen before, helps though. Good job anyways!



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:00

Yo ! I think you didn't really improve , like usual , well maybe the synchro and the pace are a little better , but it's way too simple , you didn't try anything , well optical flares are nice but you should use them well , we don't have to see it like at 0:58 , just the light is enough like at 0:54 but i understand that this was done really quickly .

So if there is an advice incan give you , it would be : take more time ! I know it's just for fun , we make something in the week-end , just an IC but if it's not good enough , we should first make longer AMVs and improve ourselves , then we can something good even in a short time ^^

And try other transitions ( i always say this) xD

Btw , what's the anime you used + song ? :p

Good luck for your next one , i'm expecting something better Very Happy

EDIT : FUCK! I thought i was the first one who commented this , but when i sended this they said 'there is a new message' and it was MDL , he's always the first ! I'll surpass you someday MDL :p




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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:01

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hello

It's not bad, I liked it, even though most of the optical flares looked forced onto the screen, they weren't well enough implemented imo and if we're a little familiar with this effect we can spot it from the first one since they all look really like the presets. 

But yeah, it was ok, the source, which I had never seen before, helps though. Good job anyways!
Thanks Very Happy! Glad you liked it

and yeah they were just forced in there, something was wrong with me when I did that.





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:03

Lol , and of course , when you typed this you didn't see my message xD




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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:14

lol, sorry for the double post

@Draga

Yes there isn't anything special the description should say why though and no I'm not talking about that it was made during the weekend xD. Honestly after 20 seconds into the clip I wanted to drop it (like usual), but then again I didn't want to drop another video because I have dropped a total of 5 videos this month and they looked actually good, but editing it bored me. So because of that by doing this clip without any ideas or knowing where I was going with this I decided to go at least half way of the song and throw some things in it. So yeah, it could have been better if I had ideas, but I didn't. The reason why I did this so quick is because I am already working on something and I didn't want to waste my time doing this and the only reason why I edited this is because I just seen the anime (movie) and wanted to do something with it and try a few things out.

and yeah lol, I didn't see your message at first until I reloaded the page.

Song is called "Neon Feather Lights" by Jesse Chui





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:39

hi, i love your amv *^* i have understood the story well and i don't think there are bigs mistakes, all right !
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 14:50

Ahah i see ^^ thanks , but you didn't tell me the anime's name yet xD




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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 15:24

Draga a écrit:
Ahah i see ^^ thanks , but you didn't tell me the anime's name yet xD
oh sorry about that the anime is called "Kotonoha no Niwa" and the english name is "The Garden of Words"

@SoulBankai

Thanks man! glad you like it Smile





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 15:37

Lol , thanks again ^^ , good luck for your next one Smile




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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 15:44

Draga a écrit:
Lol , thanks again ^^ , good luck for your next one Smile
np and thanks, hopefully I finish by august because I really need to finish this one or I'd hurt myself xD





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 19:53

Draga a écrit:
FUCK! I thought i was the first one who commented this , but when i sended this they said 'there is a new message' and it was MDL , he's always the first ! I'll surpass you someday MDL :p
Ca ferait un bon scénario de shonen Razz


Back to the vid ^^
I think the mix anime/music worked perfectly here.
The flares effects are too visible, especially when you use the exact same flare on two different scenes
(for example 1:11, 1:12), but once again, they fit the anime really well.
Overall it wasn't bad, it had a nice atmosphere, but it was too simple : you should try different transitions/effects 
 in your future clips Wink.



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 20:04

@Satsumayu Thank you! I agree with you on everything





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 20:49

nice ambient  bro  ñ__ñ Smile
and good video :gg:
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Dim 23 Juin - 21:40

@Hikado thanks man! gladly appreciate it Smile





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Lun 24 Juin - 0:51

berserk movie 3


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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Lun 24 Juin - 1:41

El.G a écrit:
berserk movie 3
No this is Halo Legends Razz





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Lun 24 Juin - 4:06

Obviously, Naruto Shippuden Movie 9



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Lun 24 Juin - 6:09

lol? .__.
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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Each Day   Mer 26 Juin - 5:51

What's going on here @_@





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