I'll surely comment your amv but before making that, can you please go and make a small presentation of yourself there? http://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/f1-presentation
That would be much appreciated
For your vid, it's quite not bad, especially the beginning actually, it's well edited and there are some nice transitions but when the song really begins at 0:29 the pace becomes just toooo slow and this overlay thing just takes too much space, it's a little bothering. Of course you had to darken the scenes but not in a way that makes the action harder to see.
The rythm becomes better afterwards, you have some nice ideas like red eye and others, from 0:56 till the end I thought it was really nice. Before that you still had some really long scenes and some really too static (the plans on Eren's Titan for example) and it's also breaking your pace.
So yeah some parts were really nice and some others not so much, but soon enough you'll manage to make your editing solid on the whole vid. Keep it up
0:38 Audio bug?