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MessageSujet: [Pride] Love³   Ven 2 Aoû - 3:01

Oh ~
Hi there!How's everyone doing ? (*´・v・)


This is an amv I've made for a local contest and it's a very amateur work as you can see (x'D).
All information and download link can be find at amvnews page down here:
            http://amvnews.ru/index.php?go=Files&in=view&id=5222
             

        but just in case
  Anime: Hyouka
  Song: Love,Love,Love -Avalanche City
 Outro Song : Jonsí - Around us

Hope you guys enjoy xD
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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Ven 2 Aoû - 14:46

Quite good. I didn't know any of your work before today so I'm glad to see that you're not late about the technique and the bases.

I say it's good because I didn't know what you were capable of but there's some things to fix for your next AMV, yet.

I'm thinking about the wayyyy too looooooong scenes you put like at 1min35s. It's 7s long and in editing it's an eternity especially because the guy doesn't move until the end of the scene.

Another thing : when you cut a scene to put the same scene but forward in time like from 2min02s to 2min08s, you need to soften all the cut whit some blur (at least) so it disturb less the eye ^^

Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next creation Wink



Arigato gozaimasu SkyZu !!!!





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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Ven 2 Aoû - 15:18

Hello!

I think a lot like Skydean, it was quite nice, there were some good ideas in the beginning and there's an identity in the color corrections, the effects you implemented worked well together and matched the atmosphere. The editing was ok, nothing really awesome but nothing really shocking except for those famous toolongtoostatic scenes. Be careful with it.

However, I also felt that you worked more your beginning than your end, I felt like the pace wasn't really growing through the vid and the end look quite rawer than the beginning. Which is a "problem", it's better when it's the contrary, a light start for an awesome final.

But yah it's a good romance amv overall so good job and I'm waiting for your next one :gg:



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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Ven 2 Aoû - 16:23

Skydean & MDL told everything. You said you were a newbie in your presentation, so I was a bit surprised Razz (In the good way)
GG, and i'm waiting for your next one





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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Ven 2 Aoû - 23:00

Thanks everyone for your feedback! (*´・v・)

It's really nice to have some constructive criticism (rare thing these days q__q).

And yeah, I'll be sure to publish my future works here! xD Thanks again Smile 
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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Dim 4 Aoû - 17:37

There was a nice athmosphere, the colors matched very well, and I think the the blur effect you added on the whole video was nice .

Overall I really liked it, even if it was too slow sometimes (for example like Skydean said, that long sce at 1:35 ^^)



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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Dim 4 Aoû - 19:50

Amour au cube.

Honestly if you got featured on amvnews.ru it means, most of the time, that you have a minimum of skills XD.

As for the video itself, it was easy to follow, i would have prefered a bit more energy in the chorus, maybe with some more internal beat sync and a more active pace of scenes. cause it felt a lot on the same speed all the time. But maybe the anime doesn't help, i dunno. :l

the 3d elements were a good idea, but i'll be curious if you can bring it to another level on your next one.


well then, a good video overall but it just felt a bit lacking of pace change. I'm curious to see what you'll do next




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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Lun 5 Aoû - 2:28

Satsumayu a écrit:
There was a nice athmosphere, the colors matched very well, and I think the the blur effect you added on the whole video was nice .

Overall I really liked it, even if it was too slow sometimes (for example like Skydean said, that long sce at 1:35 ^^)

OMG *^*

Thank you Satsu-san :3

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Amour au cube.

Ulala~
I wonder why french makes everything more sexy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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MessageSujet: Re: [Pride] Love³   Lun 5 Aoû - 4:37

Rien ne vaut tes doigts de pieds.



Arigato gozaimasu SkyZu !!!!





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