So as i said , i'll comment this so here we go ( not a fan of the remix )
-00:10 avoid taking a scene and put a shake on it for the impact , it doesn't feel natural at all , well in this case , and the black and white was really useless here ( for the rest it was ok)
-00:13 the zoom could have been better , otherwise you can put just a cut+blur , it´s enough here
-00:17 it's me or there are glitches here ? WTF! Encoding problems ?
-00:24 don't do it again ! Too static , the text effect wasn't well done (even if the idea isn't bad ) and a lip synchro of a girl with a guy singing...fuck DAT logic...
-00:41 the zoom out here is too fast , do it on more frames next time
-00:52 i didn't like the blur color of that overlay , i think that you should have changed the color of that overlay so it can fit with the rest , otherwise it's ok
-00:56 WTF , i don't see the point of doing a zoom in here , the two scenes aren't related, ratter different , a simple cut wasn't enough...
-1:12-1:40 you could have used an overlay here
-1:36 LIP FLAP , WATCH OUT !!!
Despite of all of this , i liked your AMV , it's not really easy to edit with this anime lol
Anyways , like always , improvement !! Try to fix these few things and next time it'll be much more better ^^
Keep it up !
Edit : the twitch was a little strong and really fast i mean we saw it only on few frames xD , and the AMV lacks some overlays especially with this song ^^