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MessageSujet: VoidGirl   Jeu 15 Aoû - 13:18


so okay I tried to add a story to it, but i failed big time...anyway it supposed to go this way: Shu saw a big crash from his way to school, a girl who he never saw before was there and wearing his school uniform, the girl said that she was from another galaxy who has come to earth to help Shu stop the alien invasion and only he can do it, and after Shu learned that the fight to save the Earth has begun Neutral  and blablalbalblq kanyway enojy...
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MessageSujet: Re: VoidGirl   Jeu 15 Aoû - 20:03

Just wanted to say that i'll comment this later as i promised :p




Thx Oxide !!! <3

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MessageSujet: Re: VoidGirl   Ven 16 Aoû - 17:12

So as i said , i'll comment this so here we go ( not a fan of the remix )

-00:10 avoid taking a scene and put a shake on it for the impact , it doesn't feel natural at all , well in this case , and the black and white was really useless here ( for the rest it was ok)

-00:13 the zoom could have been better , otherwise you can put just a cut+blur , it´s enough here

-00:17 it's me or there are glitches here ? WTF! Encoding problems ?

-00:24 don't do it again ! Too static , the text effect wasn't well done (even if the idea isn't bad ) and a lip synchro of a girl with a guy singing...fuck DAT logic...

-00:41 the zoom out here is too fast , do it on more frames next time

-00:52 i didn't like the blur color of that overlay , i think that you should have changed the color of that overlay so it can fit with the rest , otherwise it's ok

-00:56 WTF , i don't see the point of doing a zoom in here , the two scenes aren't related, ratter different , a simple cut wasn't enough...

-1:12-1:40 you could have used an overlay here

-1:36 LIP FLAP , WATCH OUT !!!

Despite of all of this , i liked your AMV , it's not really easy to edit with this anime lol

Anyways , like always , improvement !! Try to fix these few things and next time it'll be much more better ^^

Keep it up ! Very Happy

Edit : the twitch was a little strong and really fast i mean we saw it only on few frames xD , and the AMV lacks some overlays especially with this song ^^




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MessageSujet: Re: VoidGirl   Mar 20 Aoû - 21:35

Hello, sorry for the late reply Razz

I already told you a few words about this one on skype. I won't add a lot of thing, so yeah I quite liked it but I think the full screamo parts needed some more differences and power. I didn't really like the typo on Inori's mouth and some accelerations looked unrealistic and it was bothering.

So yeah not bad, I kinda liked the association so it worked well for me but I think you can still be more rigorous and further :gg:



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