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MessageSujet: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 3:07


Arrow  ENGLISH MAN HERE
this is almost one of my first AMV
i always only used 'AE'
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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 3:43

Hello,

I'll surely comment your amv but before making that, can you please go and make a small presentation of yourself there? http://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/f1-presentation

That would be much appreciated :gg:

I may edit this post tomorrow



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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 9:13

MDRRRR i saw some arabic subtitles there xD

+1 MDL :p




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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 20:41

lol what's the wrong with you people i just wanna some of "tips" to be sure -_-
not to define myself or where i live..
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drga: yeh i am u can say the some of "losecontrol" or some of membrs from ST
MDL: i will but soon ^_^
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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 20:54

Ok then

From the moment we can see subtitles, watermark and other stuffs like that you have no credibility as an editor. Just hide them the way you prefer (cropping, zooming in...) or find raw sources.

For one of your first amv it's not too bad, especially since you use AE but be careful about the editing, the pace is bad, too long scenes especially this one at the end and some of your effects have no point. Don't go from blue to red with a simple push between the two scenes, it needs better transitions.

The intro/outro is especially ugly and doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the video, you have to stay coherent.

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lol what's the wrong with you people i just wanna some of "tips" to be sure -_- not to define myself or where i live..
We don't want to know everything about you, it's just a rule of politeness on most of the forums. So please conform to it, it doesn't have to be long or anything so it shouldn't take you too long.

Bye.



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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 21:17

MagicDarkLight: thx so much it really will help me ^_^
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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 23:32

If you don't write a little presentation, i lock this topic and your login. We have rules, and We apply the rules for all. You have 1 day to apply the rules.
I'm not here to debate.


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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Jeu 22 Aoû - 23:53

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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Ven 23 Aoû - 12:11

We aren't looking for problemes or anything like that ^^ we're just applying the rules xD

Even if it´s your first AMV , you have to review your basics , especally for the logo/watermark/subtitles you have to remove them no matter what , MDL said the rest ^^

And about the subtitles , it wasn't racist or anything like that , i was just kidding , i'm arabic too ^^

Anyways , good luck for your next ones Smile




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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Ven 23 Aoû - 18:43

There are still some logos/subtitles (crop them with virtual dub for examples)
The text effects are not dynamic enough
The slide transitions are too visible (either choose scenes that are more alike, or add some blur)
Some scens are too long/static (for example 0:31)
That "frame" effect starting around 0:45 is not really useful
A 1 minute AMV (not counting intro/outro) is a little short to really have an opinion.

Overall it's not bad for a first amv even if the pace could be better. Good luck for your next ones, but you should begin by correcting this logo/subtitles problems ; ).



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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Ven 23 Aoû - 21:46

your feedback of everyone is very strong
Very happy that I met a very professional friends like you guys
hope not to be a problem for u in the next few days..Smile 
about drga lol Just noticed now you are from Tunisia Sorry about this I thought it was the province of a subsidiary of France:P 

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MessageSujet: Re: [Code Breaker] !! BUILT ON SECRETS    Ven 23 Aoû - 21:50

Haha yeah ^^ np dude , feel free to post any of your new work here and we'll help ^^

Have a good day Very Happy




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