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MessageSujet: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 5:06


Hi everyone !!
to be sure i don't know if i will complete it or not ^^"
i always make some of short AMV so excuse me for that
PROG : AFTER EFFECTS
SONG : the end of The Hobbit's movie
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MessageSujet: Re: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 14:12

Yo ,
There is a fact that you have to understand first,
You want to do something " awesome " , I mean technically, this can be awesome ( and by the way the level is not so " high " ), but this is not, and it wont be awesome until you wont get a " sense " behind your technique.

I mean, this doesnt have any sense, this is too damn short ( not even 1minute of editing ) , we cant even read any story line and I wont talk about mixing making of with the AMV.
I can understand that you want to look " cool " , really I can understand it, but you will be cool only if you use your technique to show something , a story , a concept , anything you want.

But here we can clearly see one thing :
This is the technique for the technique and nothing else. Even if there is a fake " story line " behind it, this is definitely a lie.

Start to think about " Why " and not " How " , using a software is so EASY, there are many tutorials on youtube or digital tutors that you can find for free, to do many things.
But using your head is another story, and you will see that this will take you moooore time than just using technique without any line/sense.

Think about why before how
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MessageSujet: Re: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 15:20

l'amv qui etais en fait un making of?
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MessageSujet: Re: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 15:44

Hello

Indeed El.G pointed out the most important point. And it's not the only one because your technique isn't perfect either. Let's just talk about basics of editing you have seriously wrong transitions regarding colors management, we go from dark to bright, red to blue and blue to red, this kind of thing shocks the eye. Since you definitely can add color correction to your scenes, why not use these techniques to make your transitions smoother and more logical?

Not only this but think about how a film would be filmed, what the hell with 0:31? xD It definitely doesn't look right, I understood it's like kurapika is attacking the girl from Haruhi but no, that's not how you should show it in a video context.
In a more "subtle" way, you have this same problem with the other plans, but now it's more about perspective and proportion, you put Kiritsugu in Haruhi, fine, the colors are okay (maybe not the flares) but the position? How come he looks like he was just waiting for his bus when the person at his left is definitely pushed out?
Same for Kurapika who looks barely taller than the leaf behind him. All of this needed more work and reflexion.

It's a good thing that you're trying a lot of stuff but try to improve in basics and be sure what you're going to do in effects is of some use for your editing and/or story. Keep it up
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MessageSujet: Re: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 19:09

thnx everyone I really appreciate that Except "Cmoididi"
both of u right, but the truth i was geting some of "sense" when i was making this amv in the same time geting many wrong "for my own technique" and i don't know what is "Basics" return to.?
i don't have any background about this kind of amv i just beging with "fake story" cuz i know of i have "a truth story" i will not make it "truth" i don't have anyone can help me for that.can u?
Tutorial ؟ about what.? and where.?
hope make me unFrench will not made trouble for u guys
it's just "Point of view" not to be angry.
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MessageSujet: Re: Misty Mountains [ With Making of ]   Misty Mountains [ With Making of ] Icon_minitimeSam 28 Sep - 20:18

Hello!
There is of the idea but it is not still concrete. I agree with what is mentioned.
Before launching to you in these complicated projects, study in the first time of all the bases of editings. For the risk-taking, gave up for the moment. Make a longer project.
Good luck for the next!
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