Not too bad, it might be your best so far. You still have problems with rythm and synch, it wasn't accurate enough and thus it quickly becomes linear. Try to really focus on the important beats, otherwise your video will always seem off the audio.
As for the color correction, I didn't like it. I've watched Canaan so I know about the colors stuff in the plot but imo you didn't make use of the concept efficiently because of your lack of techniques. In the end, it just looks as if you just put random magic bullet presets and that's it. So yeah, it needed more work and creativity.
Anyways, that was watchable but not really interesting. Good job nevertheless and see you to the next