Sorry but I didn't like it, as a mep project it didn't work out at all. I'll just make a quick track per track.
Track1: Not a bad part, a bit too classic for Lost Canvas but overall it's quite good.
Track2: Not bad too but it feels like you were forcing the transitions too much. Some worked out, but for example the three transitions at 0:50, well the cam moves were too messy. Also the scene selection made me think that the hero was standing still in front of this laser during the whole part.
Track3: That's somehow the best track, the transitions are stylish and as an individual it could pass but at the same time it's the track which ruined the entire mep. Because, simply put you're totally off the pace. Your scenes are way too fast for this part, it's as if you edited a totally different part and at 1:13 you don't even bother marking the big change in the song.
Track4: So yeah, of course you didn't raise the pace enough to overcome what was before. So of course this became incredibly linear, and yeah, well it's not the only thing. Your cam moves needed to be smoother and more consistent, here they're too slow and you're basically zooming anywhere without any real reasons.
Track5: It was quite useless and unfitting, it would have been smarter to use this part as the outro.
So yeah sorry but I didn't like it this time. It's a pity because for some of you at least, I know that you're capable of more than this, even in 3 days. Anyways, good luck in this contest and see you to the next