Not bad overall, I thought that in the first half of the mep it was quite linear but it becomes better afterwards. Well this song isn't the easiest when it comes to pacing it right. I'll make a track per track
Track 1: I liked it a lot, that was energetic and had some interesting techniques, it's actually my favourite of the mep, good job
Track 2: The beginning had the right tone for the variation of the song. However it soon becomes quite messy, I'll explain: first your scenes are sometimes really short and the cuts you use are what I'd call "hard cuts" so you're always giving the pace a new impulse while I think this part of the song was one of the only one who needed a somehow calmer atmosphere. You also use some really rough cam moves, imo some were unnecessary but almost all of them needed to be smoother, you should use more frames and some radial blurs. I've detailed it a lot compared with the others but that doesn't mean that was all that bad (the scene selection was really nice), but indeed, the high pace of the transitions makes the mep look a bit linear at this point.
Track 3: Not bad at all, I thought some impacts were missing, like at 1:01 for example it needed more power imo. My main complain would be about the way you followed the song, I think the video could have been closer to the song with more impacts. But still cool!
Track 4: That's way better and is one of my favourites ;)You really got the atmosphere of the song here imo. Be careful with your fire masks, they needed more work to look well implemented and also the roll at 1:35 was a bit inconsistent.
Track 5: Nice part which follows well the pace of the song. I just dont understand why you suddenly zoom in at 1:49 and I thought the chorus part was a bit slower than expected. But this final fight is quite weird to edit to so I understand xD
Track 6: A cool part to end the mep! Nothing special to say about this one, except that I thought Krillin and Tien didn't have their place here XD
So yeah overall a nice shonen mep, guys! Good job