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 [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)

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MessageSujet: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Ven 24 Jan - 13:41





"Guilt is difficult to deal with."

Creator: [key]Scarlet
Anime: Deadman Wonderland
Song: Still Broken - Plan Three
Premiered: 2013-12-02
Studio: Rising Production

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Video on Akross

Hey guys, it's been a while since the last time! This is my Akross entry.
I made this video in about 15 days. It started out with a simple and linear concept, but then I decided to add something personal in the story and in the technical aspect.
However I hope you like it, enjoy!
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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Ven 24 Jan - 17:41

not bad at all.
the most thing i hate it in this amv is the black frame and the Sparkles cuz it make the scene dark in some parts and not consistent .
any way keep it up.
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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Ven 24 Jan - 20:50

Hello!

I can't say I'm really a fan of your video, in my opinion most of your ideas needed more work or had to be highlighted better. The story looked kind of rushed, the real red man comes quite out of nowhere. I would have liked to see him watch Ganta fighting for nothing for example.

Technically, I thought the cookie cutter you had to darken the video was hiding it too much. There are other means to make a video look darker, imo this one is disturbing and hides your editing.
Another problem would lie in the cam moves, I thought they were quite rough and I would have liked to see more movement blurs so that they would look smoother.

Overall it's not bad, but I think this could have been cleaner and thus better. Anyways, good luck in the contest! :gg:



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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Ven 24 Jan - 20:52

Hello,
very good amv you've made on this anime, i know it the end now :p
but at 1:42 turst me the voice was embarrassing because i was completely with you in the story with picture and music only, and suddenly a voice. Expect that awesome amv, good luck for akross Smile
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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Lun 27 Jan - 21:47

Hey! Thanks for the comments, especially MDL for the detailed one. Wink
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MessageSujet: Re: [key]Scarlet - Blame (AKROSS 2013)   Ven 7 Fév - 17:51

the stream link is dead Sad

but as far as i remember, i kinda follow MDL's comment.

but my main issue with it was the "voice-over" part, it's hard to make without putting you out of the amv (it did the same on bankrupt! haha), but the main thing that bugged it for me was the different font for "Redman". It really isn't well-blended for me.

I prefered the one piece amv you made for JE. but for 15 days it's decent. congrats for being draft-picked in finalists Wink




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