It's not bad overall, imo you could have easily been in the finalists
Overall it was quite cool, there are some transitions. However I really think you used too many pushes without thinking so much about them, because there are a lot that look incoherent, if scenes don't really fit for a push, then most of the time it's better to avoid it.
Also, I thought that the variations of pace weren't obvious enough.
Anyways, good job and good luck in the contest, it's not over yet