Not bad but I didn't really like it, I felt like you were missing most of the impacts, I didn't really feel the song through your editing. It's especially on the Sword of the stranger part though.
I don't think the push with the black solid was always a good transition, first it becomes boring quite quickly and then it's quite slow, so it wouldn't fit in a chorus imo.
The texts were kinda putting me off too, they were almost just thrown over the screen, it lacked implementation.
But it's cool to try some stuff in an IC, well this time I don't think it paid off but keep it up!