: The idea of matching the lyrics with the anime was nice, I liked your typography effects (1:41 is my fav
But overall the amv lacked dynamism imo, there were too many static scenes (exemple : 1:08). And you should try to diversify your transitions, not only use cut-transitions.
(Also 0:48 : The heart is ok, but those colors..., not quite my taste :/ )Death Silence
: I think the video has the same defaults as the previous one (too many cut transitions and static scenes), but as the music is more calm, it didn't bother me as much.
About the clock that appears around 1 minute : it was a bit too obvious that it
didn't come from an anime : you should try to has gradient/shading, so that it
blends better with the other sources.
Apart from that, I really liked the cross-over as well as the atmosphere and story
you built in this video (and it made me wonder why there are so many eye-patch anime girls