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MessageSujet: delete   Jeu 19 Juin - 15:03

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MessageSujet: Re: delete   Mar 24 Juin - 15:18

Not bad overall, a bit repetitive but nothing really faulty technically.

In my opinion, you should avoid fading to black then showing the same scene to finally cut just behind like you did at 23s and 25s. It is neither fluid nor pretty (it actually means or represents nothing at all for me in the first place) so don't do it. Just show the next scene after "the fade to black" transition and it should be fair at least.

Push transitions like the one you put at 41s should be more discrete (try to make a push transition between a scene A and a scene B by luring us into the illusion that it is the same scene with just a slide to change the camera position). Start by get rid of the black separation between the two scenes that makes it obvious that we have two different scenes here.

Finally I would like you to improve your flickering corners (from 1min43s to 1min54s) first of all, I don't think that making it multicolored is really useful unless you're making a dance/fun AMV. For an action clip, you'd rather want them black and white because it fits with any situation or, if you can, you should match their colors with the scenes colors.
Second error concerning the flickering effect is that its too "cornered", I think it would be nicer if you make the borders flicker as well (not too spread but not invisible either).
And thirdly, it fits better on scenes with zoom/unzoom because it gives a "speed sensation" but you're not compelled at all to have those kind of scenes to add flickers on it, it just fits better with them.

See ya for your next video.



Arigato gozaimasu SkyZu !!!!





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MessageSujet: Re: delete   Mar 24 Juin - 16:47

Hello, wow I didn't see your thread Surprised

I think that you have a good sense of pace and synch, but you make some weird transitions, Skydean mentioned most of them, I think especially of the push transitions. Also I agree that cookie cutter at the end was really bad, he developped that as well haha

But yeah keep it up, just try to be cleaner when you make your effects and it should be interesting.



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MessageSujet: Re: delete   Mer 25 Juin - 6:29

WOOOHOOOOOOO, Thank you so much for ur criticism Skydean and MDL, I appreciate it!
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