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MessageSujet: [Kisagi] Wanted Love   Ven 20 Juin - 13:37



Welp finally it is here, my first amv in 2014! This was pretty difficult for me in the scene selection part because this anime just does not have enough serious scenes. I haven't been editing in more than 3 months and I was finally able to finish this and the outcome seemed pretty good to me. Well enjoy eberyone!



DL: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=195773





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love   Mer 25 Juin - 19:22

Hello

I didn't really like it, the pace was way too slow in the first chorus and overall, all the scenes were static and you didn't make enough effort to remove this feel. The transitions were mostly cuts and I think the black glow you put on some scenes was useless and was just hiding the scenes (so it slowed the editing even more). So yeah, I think it could have been much better, and not especially with impressive stuff but just little things. It's not because an anime is not awesome in its animation that you should just use it as an excuse imo.

Good luck for the next one



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love   Mer 25 Juin - 22:29

Thanks for your comment!

This actually came out the way I wanted it to... I guess people just have differentiated likes. I did notice that there were a few places that were way too long, but I just kept it in there.

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
The transitions were mostly cuts and I think the black glow you put on some scenes was useless and was just hiding the scenes (so it slowed the editing even more).

It's not because an anime is not awesome in its animation that you should just use it as an excuse imo.

I have no idea what you are talking about...





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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love   Mar 1 Juil - 15:39

Hey ! Nice beginning but when you came to the first chorus, you didn't follow the rhythm well enough.
You need to increase action when the music rises and begin to speed up. You can do that by increasing the number of scenes and shortening the time they appear and/or you can chose scenes more dynamic, with more action in them.
Another thing to notice : don't only count on the lyrics to make us understand your story. Their is many people who don't speak English quite well or at all across the world (even on youtube) and even for those who do, we need something more interesting to watch.



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Wanted Love   Mer 2 Juil - 11:25

Skydean a écrit:
Hey ! Nice beginning but when you came to the first chorus, you didn't follow the rhythm well enough.
You need to increase action when the music rises and begin to speed up. You can do that by increasing the number of scenes and shortening the time they appear and/or you can chose scenes more dynamic, with more action in them.
Another thing to notice : don't only count on the lyrics to make us understand your story. Their is many people who don't speak English quite well or at all across the world (even on youtube) and even for those who do, we need something more interesting to watch.

Thanks for your comment!

Yes it was slow, I did it on purpose (people do have different opinions about this)... and as much as it seems like I did not follow the lyrics of the song whatsoever. The story is completely different, but may be confusing for a few people.





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