The flares were bad! fix them etc
the 1st part/ the slow one, again.. i don't like it all it didn't had the vibe for this song AT ALL
the action part on other hand was good it had some choppy pans here and there thou
overall not ur best, try to be creative with transitions and don't use only one episode and one song...!
"They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same"- Kurt Cobain