As Echo said, that wasn't too bad but some transitions were definitely bad. Usually because they needed more work, but honestly if you feel like you can't do better than an unclean chrominance at 1:40 or a wrong mask like Kirito at 1:46, just find another solution.
The problem with the beginning isn't the speed of your editing, but the fact that the scenes were accelerated unnaturally, that just didn't look right. Also, yeah you're making transitions but when you don't the editing isn't so great, your scenes don't go that well together at some point. For example the "electric guys' part", yeah ok they all use electricity but the scenes just don't go hand in hand because of position, movement, colors...
I liked what you did at the end, I wouldn't have thought the audio cut would sound so good this way xD
So in the end, I thought you had some cool transitions, most of the time the pace is ok but it also feels way too much like a draft and it lacked cleanliness.
Keep it up guys