I'll be quite brief, it's quite obvious that you are still beginners, I praise you for taking on the challenge of an IC. For the next time you must absolutely think about how following the song as much as possible, you can't let too long scenes on a chorus like that. Also your fades are glitchy, I don't know how you're making them but you really need to make them softer, use more frames and use the tools you have at hand to make them, don't try to play with opacity yourself. Keep it up either way
It was better but there still are a lot of mistakes. Unnatural accelerations, inconsistent cam moves at the beginning. And overall the editing was just plain, I mean you relied too much on the awesomeness of your anime but as editors, you didn't bring much in terms of synch and pace. You need to find better ways to sequence your scenes and to follow the different variation of the songs. Well I guess you are still beginners too so take your time and don't give up.