Most of us are away for the holidays but don't worry, we'll come back and give opinion on your vid'.
About' your amv, Overall it's not bad especially in terms of sync. But, I think there are some flaws in your work :
1) Be careful with some of your cam' moves and zooms. Most of them, especially in the beginning are not good enough, you have to be more accurate.
2) Be careful with the rythm, must of the time you don't follow the pace enough and it's troublesome. When the music goes faster, accelerate the scenes themselves won't really help you to keep the pace, you have to accelerate your editing, not the scenes.
3) Maybe sometimes you should use color correction to personalize your work.
That's all! Good luck for the next!