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MessageSujet: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Jeu 15 Jan - 22:42



"My upload on my birthday XD "

My first AMV this year and yah it's full this time X) . I started this AMV like 5 months ago and was planing to join Akross this year but I didn't manage to finish it in time .. so here you go .

I really faced alot of problems during this work since it's my first time with Crossover / Romance , but I think I manged to make it good .

I won't talk about the story this time cause the AMV will do perfectly I believe , and the rest for you imagination XD .

all Info in the Outro

Download : mediafire.com watch/go3vq8zg1659ha7/AMV-_7_Numbers_deluxe.mp4



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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Jeu 15 Jan - 23:29

Yeeaaaaaaaah really cool !

Where is the download link ? xD


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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Jeu 15 Jan - 23:29

I'll comment later but do you actually know the deadline for akross is on 25th January??

And happy birthday btw xD

EDIT: Here's my comment

I liked it too, that was pretty well done, I don't like to make comparisons but it reminded me a bit of "The boy who murdered love", not in a bad way, I just say it because of the MC and the catchy song. And honestly, your effects are way cleaner, you put your efforts in the right place and that's nice to see. The rythm is well followed too.

Now what bugged me is that at the same time, it's really messy. You have a LOT of fades, not to say almost every scene has a fade and that is a bad thing especially during cam moves. The screen can get easily overloaded because of that and that just ruins your efforts to make your effects clean. Sometimes, cuts do a way better job, it should also make the vid look a bit more "pro", well in short it would have made it cleaner.
Not only that but that constant bouncy cam can be really annoying. Ok maybe that's just a matter of taste, but you definitely went overboard with them at some points (mostly the beginning), I guess you tried to make up for the static scenes you had but it definitely does not look natural, it just breaks the flow of your movements.
Also please don't zoom when you're not zooming xD At 1:29 and 1:51 those are definitely wrong.

Despite these flaws, I really enjoyed your work on the crossover and effects in general, they were clean and they fit the atmosphere which was pretty cool as well. As you said, the story is quite clear, so good job on all that. It's a shame you didn't send it to the akross, it could have placed well No But anyways, keep it up, I'm looking forward to your next works! o/



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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Sam 17 Jan - 1:53

Luciole a écrit:
Yeeaaaaaaaah really cool !

Where is the download link ? xD

Thanks alot X) .. and I updated the post with the download link ..Have fun XD
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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Sam 17 Jan - 2:08

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
I'll comment later but do you actually know the deadline for akross is on 25th January??

And happy birthday btw xD

EDIT: Here's my comment

I liked it too, that was pretty well done, I don't like to make comparisons but it reminded me a bit of "The boy who murdered love", not in a bad way, I just say it because of the MC and the catchy song. And honestly, your effects are way cleaner, you put your efforts in the right place and that's nice to see. The rythm is well followed too.

Now what bugged me is that at the same time, it's really messy. You have a LOT of fades, not to say almost every scene has a fade and that is a bad thing especially during cam moves. The screen can get easily overloaded because of that and that just ruins your efforts to make your effects clean. Sometimes, cuts do a way better job, it should also make the vid look a bit more "pro", well in short it would have made it cleaner.
Not only that but that constant bouncy cam can be really annoying. Ok maybe that's just a matter of taste, but you definitely went overboard with them at some points (mostly the beginning), I guess you tried to make up for the static scenes you had but it definitely does not look natural, it just breaks the flow of your movements.
Also please don't zoom when you're not zooming xD At 1:29 and 1:51 those are definitely wrong.

Despite these flaws, I really enjoyed your work on the crossover and effects in general, they were clean and they fit the atmosphere which was pretty cool as well. As you said, the story is quite clear, so good job on all that. It's a shame you didn't send it to the akross, it could have placed well No But anyways, keep it up, I'm looking forward to your next works! o/


hi ..
yah I kinda like zooming sometime more than I should XD , but I wanted to make fast rhythm at the beginning to make the cut trans for the slow part to make more details then for the important part of the story ... but yah I agree with you that it was kinda overload at some points with zoom and fade ....
The problem with it being messy is that I couldn't find a good scenes at some points .. but I manged somehow to attach the story with good scenes I believe .

about Akross , I thought the deadline will be already over by the time I finish this so I didn't register in the first place , and I found out now that there is some time still but only for registered people XDXD

so yah ,really thanks for you great feedback and for the BD wish X) , I will work more to get a cleaner editing next time Smile

Thanks .
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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Sam 17 Jan - 7:35

Hey!

Really nice overall, I have nothing to add' about what MDL said but I think this amv deserves more attention overhere Wink

I'll wait for your next work!



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MessageSujet: Re: AMV -- 7 Numbers    Sam 17 Jan - 12:58

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Hey!

Really nice overall, I have nothing to add' about what MDL said but I think this amv deserves more attention overhere Wink

I'll wait for your next work!

Thanks alot for your words X3
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