It's a very cool mep overall, I really liked the first two parts, the penguindrum and the last two. The effects were really nice and it was nice to see that in IC. My fav parts are Haruhi and Ef though, they're a cut above the rest.
Steins;gates had too many rough cam moves with such a calm part, it wasn't enjoyable.
5cm had the same problem but also the edges of the masks were way too noticeable, I didn't like that one, the transition with Bakemonogatari was also overlooked, the mask isn't consistent with the background it's on.
Good job in IC, a quite unusual mep for this kind of competition, I wish you good luck!