♪ In Your Soul [AMV]

I don't know if you will see me here, making AMVs... Next time, I'll take my time for making a very good video, or at least.. I'll try it

Hello!

Not bad, that felt a bit different from your usual Ano hana amv, I liked the risks you take in your transitions and effects but I think you still need to polish your skills more. For example the sweep effects like at 0:18 or later aren't looking very good, it would be better with cleaner and neater edges. Same with the ladder at 0:22, it could have been a nice way of making things appear but it needs more work than that to look clean, now it looks very much like a draft. An example of what I think it shoud look like: http://amvnews.ru/index.php?go=Files&in=view&id=4028 (at 1:13)

Then at 0:25, you use some nice tricks but they are a bit too much for this beginning. It's hard but you need to make all these cool looking "rythmed" transitions in a more dynamic part of the song.

Also, be careful with your fades, they look a bit too short and it makes the overall vid look less pro. Dare the cut sometimes and use more frames for your remaining fades.

Still a cute video, good job on this one Keep it up!

I like this AMV
I agree with MDL that it's a bit different than the other Anohana AMVs we normally see, and that's cool! & I love the music too xD Nice choice ^^
I'm not a pro so I can't really give you any advice or point out the negatives, sorry! But well done and keep it up

Thank you so much !! ^^ I'll take your advice for improving I saw that I can make something better.

I really appreciate the time that you took for give a critic, thank you!

Hey

I agree with MDL about the mistakes but it's still an enjoyable amv! Good job!