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MessageSujet: [Kisagi] Faith:re   Jeu 12 Fév - 4:32



Well excluding the bad poster this video is just another version of my last one and fixed a few things. Hopefully this one is better.






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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Faith:re   Sam 14 Fév - 11:55

Hello!

I liked it but I actually shouldn't xD This is mainly because you go through almost all the story of HxH and thus it really has a nice feeling. I also feel like the way you synch and selects your scenes is different from what we usually see, it feels like a MAD. And I like that.

But that doesn't mean it was well done, honestly your Shana or even your various looked way better, technically-wise. First, your cam moves are way too rough, you should definitely use more frames and be more rigorous on them. Add smoothness, be accurate etc.

The sped-up scenes are way too annoying. It must look natural and at 1:37 it definitely looks wrong. This is a breath in the song, you REALLY want to have slow-motion scenes here to make the rest even more badass and yet you do this xD I'm glad the calm part later is well managed.

Also be careful with scenes that are too static, it means a lot to add a really slight cam move sometimes.

But I liked the spirit in it haha too bad it ends on this second movie but whatever. Keep it up



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Faith:re   Sam 14 Fév - 15:41

Hey!

Sorry dude I didn't appreciate your video even if I'm sure it is better than the previous version (but I honnestly don't remember of it). This current version is still too rough for me in terms of editing. The rythm is not always well managed and besides there are cam' movements troubles and some rough cuts like at 1min52 for example but there are other moments like this.

Anyway, I know it's not easy to do a V2 of an ancient amv and I'm sure your next one will be better!

Good luck!



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MessageSujet: Re: [Kisagi] Faith:re   Sam 14 Fév - 20:50

Thank you! I shall hope to do better on those points





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