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 [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014

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MessageSujet: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Ven 13 Fév - 2:52

Waiting For You - xDeuz
("If you love someone... set it free. If it comes back... then is yours")
Anime: Nisekoi
Canción: A Thousand Years
Artista: Christina Perri
Duración: 04:04 min
Programas: Sony Vegas 8.0, After Effects CS4
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After my presentation of "Lovers Out", I had time thinking of doing something similar, an AMV drama.
And it happened in one occasion while I was talking on skype with a friend where I suddenly came a moment in which each one should write a sentence and then answer with another same, so the same day, I stayed with a phrase that perhaps I not mentioned in the talk, but if in my head.
"If you love someone... set it free. If it comes back... then is yours".
Then perhaps more complete what I wanted to do, I do not take much time to find music (Eden Team IC6> Song Pack> Easy), which might not be the most motivating and inspiring music, but I had what I wanted to, capture this phrase.
Long after below, then observe Nisekoi, an anime more comic than romantic guy who saw him again, they came scenes that possibly would help me, and then the rest was formed in my head.
Then we talk about this idea Kuruta and I, I immediately gives support, being the first to support me in making this AMV.
I am grateful to who helped me make this work: Kuruta, madaraxD, Luna, TritioAFB (each of them many thanks, I leave a few words at the end of AMV).

This AMV is dedicated to the person to whom I am very grateful for doing work that sometimes I get complicated (a complete translation of a story in English), Naru Miyasudokoro sincerely hope that this AMV is to your liking and enjoy it at least 1 time.

No more to say, I hope you to enjoy, the aim was to highlight my AMV from others AMV's of Nisekoi, I hope that the objective has been achieved with this new presentation, making an AMV drama, sentimental with Nisekoi Wink

A big salute to ZEVS1993, Hinata 1495 and Dieguito. And to all those who mention, I wish you a great 2015 !!!

Thank DarknessTheWarrior for translating this comment to English.
Thanks to Joskua for translating to english may credits messages.
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Kuruta: Sometimes you don't have the correct question in order to keep improving. Oneself must grow by himself but there's a point when someone can't answer all the questions. I've been so happy for talking with you, sharing ideas, and above everything, learning with you. Thank you so much for all the lessons, the comments, the reviews and everything you gave me. Thank you very much, Kuruta! You really are a unique and wonderful person
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[madaraxD]: There are moments when I lose myself due to things happening to me, sometimes I can't take my questions anywhere in order to get an answer, I just need a trusty and dependable person that surely will help me. All of a sudden I started thinking that I can make more that I do when I talk with you. Thanks a lot, really. You are a great friend and a very trusty person, Mike. I'm so happy for knowing you.
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Luna: When an individual has a completed piece, sharp criticism always help: it submerges the individual into reflection and triggers a sudden change, and if it is required, start all over the piece and finish it in a different way. I'm glad for always talking with you, I love your reviews. Thanks a lot, Luna  you're charming.
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TritioAFB: From time to time I thought that I wouldn't be welcomed in this AMV world. At the beginning you were like a father to me, and obviously, a great friend. Lenin: you're a noticeable and truly unique person, I've been so happy for getting to know you better. Thank you very much
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a big hello and hug to MDL too, thank you for review in the beginning :3
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MessageSujet: Re: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Sam 14 Fév - 12:13

Hello!

I'm glad I could help even a bit Razz But I still have stuff to say about this video haha First of all the story is neat and easy to understand, you also have a very nice visual identity, usually your effects and cc look really good, you have the right balance for that.

What you lack the most in this one, imo, is the cleanliness of your transitions. It's actually ruining the mood quite a lot so I think you should think about it more. First of all, you use wayyyy too manyyyy fades, please use some cuts sometimes, especially since your fades are so short, it's not only useless, it's also harming the overall perception of your work. There are times when you want to use (longer) fades and times when you need to make everything look a bit more dynamic (choruses for example). When it has to be dynamic, you use cut, when you want to slow down things, you use fades.

This is it for the basic transitions, now let's move on to your rolls... You don't want to use roll all the time, like at 0:45 this doesn't work, there's no justification for this and you see the edges too easily. Roll is a transition that is very tempting but it proves to be a bad one actually, you should prefer stuff like using pan/crop and black solids or optical flares going through the scenes (like 2:43). Another example, 2:53, why use a roll when you could have made a nice dezoom? Razz

I talked about your zooms for your next beta so I won't repeat myself but be more accurate.

But anyways, I liked it overall, honestly it made me think of my "Just a Dream" (2011), I know both videos look really different but I don't know xD I'm looking forward to your next works, try to be a bit more serious about technique and stay clean and it should be a hit!




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MessageSujet: Re: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Dim 15 Fév - 12:34

Hey!

MDL was very precise in his commentary so I won't repeat what he said...
I just want to say (no Steevie Wonder here) that your amv was a good surprise in this contest, I congratulate you for your ranking and I'll be waiting for your next project with eagerness!



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MessageSujet: Re: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Dim 15 Fév - 16:25

I enjoyed it xdeuz ! Same as mdl, nothing more to add personally. I'm looking forward to your next project !
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MessageSujet: Re: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Jeu 19 Fév - 4:34

thank you very much by his comments. I hope to receive his reviews in my next project. a big hug to everyone in special a MDL ;3, okill is of my favorite editors. I love it: soul recovery.
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MessageSujet: Re: [xDeuz] Waiting for you - Akross 2014   Jeu 19 Fév - 5:55

awww yeah nisekoi.

420/69.


main bugs for me where the 1:10 cc paper burn, which i personnaly think less than 1% of editors put it with accuracy. it always feels slapsticked without inventive overlay or transition to combine it well. and like mdl said, some blur transitions are too quick and feels less appreciative than a simple cut.

Aside from the effects, i can see you put a big bunch of effort on it. However sometimes i think i see a Madara vid with the choice on fx used. i can't really say "hey that's definitely a xdeuz vid". For now honestly it's not really a problem, but i'll be more than happy to see some effects from you which refrains from the usual we see in some amvs. But i have a feeling you're going on a right track, with practice and analysis, it will just get better. don't be shy to push forward!


Looking forward to the next. go Aeon !





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