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Date d'inscription : 02/01/2015

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MessageSujet: 「Eden 」 AMV    「Eden 」 AMV  Icon_minitimeSam 14 Fév - 18:31



A short AMV Razz

Anime: Tamako Market, K-On! Movie, Trinity Seven, Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai, Ef - A Fairy Tale of the Two, Kyoukai no Kanata, Arata-naru Sekai
Music: "East of Eden" by Zella Day
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MessageSujet: Re: 「Eden 」 AMV    「Eden 」 AMV  Icon_minitimeDim 15 Fév - 12:22

Hey!

Maybe you don't know about it but normally we only comment amv which long for more than about 1min30. So yours is actually too short to be presented here! This rule exists because it's quite difficult to give a serious opinion on something too short.
But I think you didn't know about it so I'll comment it.

Overall it's not bad, you did a nice job on the color correction and lights even if some clips were too bright in my opinion (around 35 sec). Be careful to keep visibility when you play with the light in your amv.
Besides, you have to be more accurate in your zooms, for example at 41 sec, you have to aim for a point before your zoom and arrive exactly on it at the end.
You should also better sync sometimes, you didn't sync on some important beat in my opinion and so the clips seemed too long, especially in the end!

But overall it's nice, next time make a full amv, I'm sure it will be interesting!
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MessageSujet: Re: 「Eden 」 AMV    「Eden 」 AMV  Icon_minitimeDim 15 Fév - 12:32

Hello,

Same as Echo, next time please post a long enough vid Razz

I liked the colors too and I agree on everything he said but I'll add that the animes you used are a bit too overused and it's not like you really make the sources your own: the scenes are too long and you don't mix the animes enough, it's just pretty mini parts of 5s or so put together but there needs to be more thought when you edit a various.

Keep it up!
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MessageSujet: Re: 「Eden 」 AMV    「Eden 」 AMV  Icon_minitimeDim 15 Fév - 19:16

Thanks for your concern, i'll try to make it better next time xD
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