This is not too bad but the scenes look slowed down A LOT. The framerate looks really low and that's annoying. Transitions are good but nothing out of the standard and the main problem is the end of your amv, well basically there's no end, I don't know about the original song but I think you should have thought of ending it in another way.
It felt incomplete and your ranking ended quite low but it's mainly because of this problem of "slowed down" scenes (even if they weren't, I don't really know) and the ending, the editing in itself wasn't bad. So good job and I'm looking forward to your next work.