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 [TargetGoBoom] One Piece AMV - Depths

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Date d'inscription : 05/03/2016

MessageSujet: [TargetGoBoom] One Piece AMV - Depths   Sam 5 Mar - 20:36

Hello everyone, this will be my first post on the forum so forgive me if I leave out information that was requested of me to share.
But this video was started roughly a week ago and it marked a shift in my style and how serious I want to be with my editing. So I tried several new things after being inspired by Naoya, Okill, etc. I know for know im pretty outclassed, but I hope with every new video I'll improve and create quality projects that people can enjoy.



Title: Depths
Anime: One Piece
Song: Little Black Submarines
Artist: The Black Keys
Length: 3:00
DDL: https://mega.nz/#!dVUBnJDK!VRErSVcJm27GGaFVNTT-FFK6UXsgkMlvASgg75bWtQ4
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MessageSujet: Re: [TargetGoBoom] One Piece AMV - Depths   Sam 5 Mar - 20:54

Hello, well first can you please introduce yourself in a new thread there? http://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/f1-presentation

I found the association fresh, the beginning was building up a nice atmosphere but I think you kind of lost it after the song takes off. The fights look a bit too random, the narration is getting a bit messy, I think you should have focused only on Luffy with more calls to Ace, as a viewer it was too easy to forget why they are fighting and that's a problem.

As for the technical side, the inspiration from Naoya might be a bit too clear, especially because of the HxH scenes that didn't work out for me. But it's cool that you made the effort to mention him o/
You are overusing the overlays you're using and don't really match neither the mood nor the synch most of the time. You have to restrain yourself a bit with them or find/make new ones more often.
At 2:52 the Brook masks looks quite ugly in comparison with the others, it's important not to neglect details like these imo.

So indeed, you still lack experience but nevertheless, this is an interesting project for One Piece and I'm looking forward to watching your next work. Keep it up!



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MessageSujet: Re: [TargetGoBoom] One Piece AMV - Depths   Sam 5 Mar - 21:50

MagicDarkLight a écrit:
Hello, well first can you please introduce yourself in a new thread there? http://sora-to-kasai.forums-actifs.com/f1-presentation

I found the association fresh, the beginning was building up a nice atmosphere but I think you kind of lost it after the song takes off. The fights look a bit too random, the narration is getting a bit messy, I think you should have focused only on Luffy with more calls to Ace, as a viewer it was too easy to forget why they are fighting and that's a problem.

As for the technical side, the inspiration from Naoya might be a bit too clear, especially because of the HxH scenes that didn't work out for me. But it's cool that you made the effort to mention him o/
You are overusing the overlays you're using and don't really match neither the mood nor the synch most of the time. You have to restrain yourself a bit with them or find/make new ones more often.
At 2:52 the Brook masks looks quite ugly in comparison with the others, it's important not to neglect details like these imo.

So indeed, you still lack experience but nevertheless, this is an interesting project for One Piece and I'm looking forward to watching your next work. Keep it up!

Thats fair, thank you for your analysis. I appreciate the feedback and will do my best to take the advice given. I did kind of get lazy and chose not to make more of the "negative overlays" which could've been done rather quickly and painlessly with just some simple masking, perhaps ill create some in advance for my next video lol. But im always looking to grow so, stay tuned and hopefully my next project will be even better!
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