Very cool, good effort in all parts and overall solid enough editing. What is even cooler is that you managed to keep the theme together and to make the pace evolve which is quite rare in a MEP unfortunately.
Colors did bother me a bit though, at times they are too bright (part 1), at others too dark (part 3) and it can be hard to see what's going on. It was cool to see a Code Geass part though.
Also, some effects were a bit too easy to spot, like the light streaks in the Noragami part or the shockwave impacts and smoke footages in the Mardock Scramble and last part.
I didn't really like the editing on the Mardock Scramble by the way, the transitions seemed forced on scenes, the cam moves are a bit messy and there are many fades that were compromising the cleanliness. Still a nice part but could have been less drafty imo.
I also have some stuff to say about the last part, the idea is pretty cool and there are a lot of great stuff but the city footage is a bit repetitive and we don't really feel the change of scenes which leads to a lack of variety and a drop in pace. Add to it that the masks obviously feel a bit out of place and the particles don't really help, well these were not my favourite scenes. The more "classical" phases were really awesome though, I really like the contrast and the use of text in this one.
Overall it's a very good job and a nice surprise guys, good luck in the Big Contest!