Messages : 7147 Date d'inscription : 28/10/2009 Age : 30 Localisation : BELGIQUE
Sujet: Re: [Saiba] - Unrivel Eyepatch! Mar 31 Mai - 2:43
Hey
This isn't too bad but the inspirations are too obvious. You should try your own stuff instead of trying your best to do the same as many others. Still I liked the energy you put in it.
But most of your calm parts are overlooked and make the chorus feel weak. The only good calm part was at 1:55, otherwise it's usually too fast-paced. To be complete, I should add the association is quite weird, the song is a bit too generic for TG imo.
Keep it up
SEIJUROXD Vieux Brigand
Messages : 105 Date d'inscription : 02/11/2015 Age : 28 Localisation : CMR
Sujet: Re: [Saiba] - Unrivel Eyepatch! Mar 31 Mai - 21:52
very cool man, i really liked it
Saiba 才波 Touriste
Messages : 4 Date d'inscription : 02/10/2015 Age : 26 Localisation : Venezuela
Sujet: Re: [Saiba] - Unrivel Eyepatch! Mer 1 Juin - 0:29
MagicDarkLight, Thank you very much, I will do the best I can ... I was inspired by AMV I saw long ago, thanks for the advice, I will try to improve those parts in my future projects
Breaker Ambassadeur
Messages : 506 Date d'inscription : 31/03/2013 Age : 26 Localisation : Yorozuya
Hey! I have to agree with MDL on this one it looks too much like Unravel Ghoul. Try coming up with you own sequences and effects but otherwise it was not bad ^^
Murakumo Suceur de nouilles
Messages : 71 Date d'inscription : 06/04/2015 Age : 25 Localisation : Chez moi :P
Sujet: Re: [Saiba] - Unrivel Eyepatch! Jeu 23 Juin - 1:29
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Lun 30 Mai - 23:01
, Now I want to introduce this AMV of Tokyo Ghoul, I hope you like it.... Enjoy!
